Will be fascinated by the Lord’s “red chamber of the last secret” read more than ninety times in one breath, can not stop, so that the penis congestion of the whole day. This kind of classical masterpieces that make people’s blood boil, can be compared to the only mud man’s “rivers and mountains so much love”.
When the blood flow back, re-experience the “secret”, and feel that the author’s subtle writing is far more than just the wind and moon. Such an adult version of the same novel both the essence of the original charm, it is rare, but also is the “secret” so favored by the root; do not love the “stone” people can certainly be an ordinary vernacular H to read, but any of the original have the slightest affection, the fun is far beyond the text between.
At the beginning of the text skipped the lengthy mysticism laid out in the original, and cut straight to the chase – swim in the fantasy world, drink immortal mash. The first love of Baoyu (this seems to be inappropriate, Baoyu’s love sinuses into the mother’s womb before the opening) borrowed the nephew’s daughter-in-law’s room to declare the obscene thing to the Taixu fantasyland to do a good spring dream. Wonderful here is not Baoyu’s “unrequited love”, but with the garden on the stone chair Qin Keqing the same dream, not only materialized the object of masturbation, but also for the smooth progress of the relationship between the two later laid the groundwork. Later on, the “first taste of cloud and rain” is a watery conclusion, and the “same police fantasy training cloud and rain” is the second H-plot of “The Secret of the Legacy”.
Since then, the author’s writing has become more and more skillful, not only in the flow of the text, but also in some of the echoes of the original, which is also very impressive. For example, the first few times, where the main line with the original overlap with the plot, the author will naturally introduce the original text, so that readers familiar with the “Stone Chronicle” doubly intimate – Phoenix and Baoyu in the car in the car nonsense, get a big red face, into the house is met Qin Zhong, spring heart secretly swing, “push Baoyu, laugh! said: ‘than down!'” The transition is natural and smooth.
Celestial Brook Jushi in the writing of the “Stone Chronicle” has many scruples, several deletions, Fang in the city between the ban and not stop, to be circulated. The content of the change is quite difficult to guess, the hidden words of which form the charm of the novel, but also because of the birth of the red school of thought. Although the rewriting of the fanboy is based on H, it is also a new interpretation.
In Dream of Red Mansions, Qin Keqing is my favorite character, and the specific reason can probably be analyzed by the prostitute complex. Here I want to praise the author in rewriting the full interpretation of the Baoyu, Keqing two love affair. This relationship between the two in the original ambush a lot, first of all, Baoyu in the bed of Qing dream, but Qing in the room outside the room asked the little girls to look at the cats and dogs fighting; Baoyu dream called her breast name, she wondered, but not good enough to ask; can be Qing sick Baoyu went to visit, listen to her, “I think, may not be able to get through the New Year to go,” a moment of “such as an arrow in the heart, the tears unknowingly flowed down”. Qin did not, Baoyu climbed up from the dream “only feel the heart seems to poke a knife of intolerance, wow, straight run out of a mouthful of blood. Cloud such, although only a few words, but all write Qin’s weight in the heart of Baoyu, ask the future of the Grand View Garden in the thousands of red and colorful to let the son of the women can get a few people. Cao Xueqin on the ink is not much, but she died at the time of my heart sad, especially better than Daiyu soul return.
Even if the above is my childhood on the Qin Keqing masturbation well, in short, the author for Qin Keqing’s description of the very useful to me. Another one is Qin Zhong. In the original story, it is an indisputable fact that Jia Baoyu and Qin Zhong had a love affair with each other. Baoyu saw the Qin Zhong, “obsessed for half a day, their hearts and the intention to stay”, Qin Zhong can not with Baoyu “ears and temples”, see the love of the two. After the book said Qin Zhong and intelligent children in the kang Yunyu, Baoyu and not greedy little nun, but to spoil his good deed, jealousy is obvious. Unfortunately, how to settle the score after they went to bed, this section of the original deliberately skipped, leaving people unlimited reverie. The author does not shy away from sleeve-breaking fetish, colorful writing, can be said to have deeply Cao Meng Ruan’s intention. But I have a slight criticism is that the treasure, Zhong two people seem to be too fast, the first meeting in the room fooling around, but it seems that the treasure is a hungry ghost in the color, the whale Qing people all can be husband. Against the original, the author seems to have skipped the section of the school, but also a small regret.
Book reviewers say that this “Dream of the Red Chamber” is benevolent and obscene, and our family to see the book obviously belongs to the latter. Fortunately, there is a great fan of the implementation of the pen, so that we have had a book addiction. The only difference lies in the original with the virtual pen, adapted to realize the ink; according to the reasoning of a thousand people in the heart of a thousand Jia Baoyu, and the author can be written out to get the recognition of all the people, can see a good novelist must also be a good reader. Speaking of characterization, the continuation of the rewrite of the book is really a coincidence, because readers have read the original readers for the story of the character’s words and actions are familiar with the nature of a framework in advance, as long as the continuation of the writer is not too much out of the ordinary, most of the readers are very easy to accept; that being said, this coincidentally is not so good to discuss the language a little less than the original clever, it is easy to end up with a dog’s tail to continue the sable of the notoriety. The fan male adults in this regard did a good job, basically adhering to the vernacular novel language characteristics, such as this: Qin Keqing woke up in a dream, “and then carefully recalled that the dream scene, but also the shame can not help it, and secretly angry at themselves, said: ‘Damn it! How could I dream of him?'”
I have seen some book lovers reviewing the book and criticizing the first few times, but in fact I personally prefer the previous style. The H portrayal of Lord Fanboy is certainly a steady increase in quality throughout the book, but the plot of the story is gradually moving farther and farther away from the original. From the “Autumn Flower Robbery”, the book’s momentum is slightly visible, and the author has arranged for the villain of the North King of Jing. According to the status of the king of the North King of Jing status indeed have overturned the kingdom of heaven and earth, about the rise and fall of the two houses of Rongning power, through Qin Keqing lost Tianxiang building orchestrated the theft of the Yin yuan can also be believed – otherwise, with the unusual disease seems to be insufficient to make the fragrance of the death of the jade. However, thus leading to a new world of jianghu, although in the storytelling has strengthened, but harmful to the reality of the two sons of the Tang Jiafu flying, not to mention the night, not to mention the King of the North King of the rebellion is not relying on the power of the martial arts so easily. Not to question the author’s creative standards, even if the author has the ability to take into account the focus of the author, H plot and length of the grasp may make the loss of one or the other, detrimental to the integrity of the story. The story is lively and lively, but the tragic color may be lost. Bai Xuan this character died well, one for personal factors, I am afraid to read you Tanzhi hateful and pathetic role, the second is the length of the problem mentioned earlier, the original first ten times has been expanded into more than ninety times the length of the original, if you really want to talk about the beginning and the end of the fanboys adults will not be written to the 2008 Olympic Games to go!
After reading the front of the wonderful, after the head only with thousands of favorite “Legacy of the secret” of the book friends bitterly look forward to. Said a little bit of the book’s outlook, so far the book’s first female protagonist hairpin Dai two people have not formally appeared. In fact, I am not too concerned about her two, plus the Yuan Ying Tangshi four. I see “Dream of Red Mansions” is focused on Jia Baoyu, seems to be against the intention of Cao Xueqin. Instead, I like the author of the creation of Shen Yao, the children of the rivers and lakes, for the simple reason that she has no baggage, like a blank sheet of paper to be depicted by the author, read a lot easier.
Off-topic: I have read not many H-text, in general, for the long Vantage Point is more preferred to imitate the ancient style of writing. There is a basic reason for this kind of article erotic description is very beautiful. China’s three thousand years of written history, not for nothing to live on the monkey. The worship of procreation has made our ancestors’ attitude towards sex open and even respectful, resulting in countless phrases in this area, and most of the imagery is beautiful, a little rummaging through the thesaurus you can find more than a dozen titles for the male root, the jade mortar and pestle, the spring pistil, such a symbolic and metaphorical vocabulary is very easy to evoke the reader’s beautiful associations, and you can write about ancient stories by using readily available good phrases and sentences, but it is not too much to say that it is a bit too much. On the other hand, this kind of article also has higher requirements for authors, with considerable writing skills in order to write in a decent manner, which makes my admiration for these authors deepen one more layer. For the character of the good and bad, Bao Yu so weak water to take a dipper drink, and many promiscuous protagonists are accepted, but I hope that the protagonist is at least respect for women’s, read only comfortable, or else there is nothing left of some of the senses of the bad taste.
Source: I don’t know Chinese forum, by: a bit childish