This is my first time writing a book, so please criticize.
Gray area (I)
Who am I? I don’t know. During the daytime, I’m a good student that teachers and principals praise, and at night, I’m a criminal that even the police can’t do anything about.
I’m only 18 years old, not too tall, but not too short either. My face is long and clean, and my voice hasn’t changed… Today, I want to go out and hang around again… Whenever I have such thoughts, I really struggle with them, because, it’s caused by my split personality.
“Mom, I’m going out.” I said to the family before heading out the door.
Get on my motorcycle and head for my own little suite that I rent out, where I’m at home and none of the others know about it.
The suite was small, and all I had in it was a bed, a stereo set, and a large closet with nothing else.
I went in and stripped off all my clothes, then opened the closet and took out a black bra and a pair of black panties, then I took a piece of sanitary napkin that I was going to stuff my prick into my panties.
This is the personality of one of my nasties, who likes to dress up city girls, but I still like girls, and I especially like the thrill of a girl being raped by me.
I then looked for a full body white one-piece short dress, I put on the body, fortunately, I do not have much foot hair on my body, I took a razor, to shave their own mustache with the remaining foot hair, in the stockings, and finally picked up the cosmetic painting.
Well, I finished dressing, picked up my bag, I’m going out to go to the Pub, I wear women’s clothing is not just at home or walk around, I like to go to the lively places, to some ugly than me to the female to down, sometimes will meet acquaintances, once in the street when shopping, my class share of male classmates even came to talk to me, they did not recognize me, and came to ask me for a phone number.
You’re still asking me what I’m doing in a pub.
Hey, hey, you can meet a lot of sisters when you go over there!
Gray area (II)
I walked into a PUB that was quite famous in the city I lived in, with loud music that went on and on, and of course, there were a lot of pretty sisters in this PUB, otherwise there wouldn’t have been so many people.
Out of the corner of my eye I saw a sister walk into the pub alone, I watched her for a while to make sure she was alone, so I walked up to talk to her.
Of course, there were a number of people who came to talk to me while I was watching, and went to talk to her, but for some reason she ignored them all.
“Hi,” I greeted her.
“Hi,” she said back to me.
“Can I join you for a drink? I’m on my own.”
She said, “It’s okay, I’m alone too.”
“Where are your friends? Why are you alone? Wouldn’t you be scared to come here by yourself as a girl?”
I asked her as I sat down.
“What about you? You won’t be afraid?” She responded to me.
“Heh, fair enough.” I laughed back, of course I laughed in my mind because I could be sure she already thought of me as a female.
After that I started making small talk with her, and as we both drank wine by the glass, she told me all the bitter things that were on her mind.
It turned out that she just broke up with her boyfriend, her boyfriend outside and made a new girlfriend, and before breaking up with her also colluded with his new girlfriend to tease her, she is still stupid not to know, and even gave her first time to the man, the man is still outside everywhere to show off, so that she did not know what to do.
(I first briefly recounted the woman, the woman called small P, she is 18 years old as I am, about 165 centimeters tall body is quite uniform, I eyeballed about 34C or D it. The long is not pretty type is belongs to the lovely type, but also a little like Zeng Bao Yi so. Read the local five college.) She said to me: “Y, where do you live? I’m staying with my sister, and she’s traveling with her boyfriend today, so can you come to my house and stay with me today?”
“Yeah! It’s a coincidence that I’m also renting an apartment by myself, so I’m going to sleep at your place today.” I answered and laughed wildly in my heart: ‘Hey, hey, hey, hey, it looks like someone else is going to have a bad day today.’
I made a phone call to someone at home and told them I was sleeping at a classmate’s house today, and then I left that PUB with her.
She lived in an apartment building near the beach, seriously, the scenery there was beautiful, you could see the sea, and if you listened carefully you could hear the sound of the waves, and the slight sea breeze blew, it was really comfortable.
I stopped by 7-11 on my way to her house to pick up a few things.
Wow! I had the outline of the story all figured out, but realized that typing it into a text narrative turned out to be so difficult.
Is there any seniors who can point me in the right direction? At this rate, I’m afraid I’ll be typing a super long story. I’ve already reached the second episode, and I haven’t gotten to the pornographic point yet, so I’m really sorry. I hope you don’t mind, give some more criticism, so that I have the motivation to write again.
person in the gray fringe
Gray area (III)
When I arrived at the house, I first took a look at the furnishings of the house. After making sure that there was no one else in the house and that there were no anti-burglary devices, I was very relieved to do down and chat with her.
We talked, watched TV, and drank.
Gradually, she also slowly drunk, I told her to take a shower first, said it’s late time to go to bed, then she went into the bathroom to take a shower, at this time, I picked up a pill, I bought it with my friend, I heard that after taking it the girl will become pink slutty, and will want to have sex very much.
I put the pills in an open beer.
“I’m done, go ahead and wash up, I’ve got the towel and pajamas in there, just wear mine for the pajamas.” She told me.
She came out early after washing, wearing a short nightgown and no bra, and as I watched, my bottom gradually became erect, and I quickly rushed into the bathroom, my insides burning with desire.
I finished my shower in a hurry and didn’t wear her pajamas because I didn’t care if she screamed or not. I walked out with a towel on and I realized she had already finished the bottle of beer.
She blushed and masturbated while saying in surprise, “Ah! You? …”
She’s already realized I’m a guy, but she didn’t scream out, the drug kicked in I guess. Heh heh heh!
I walked over to her and she didn’t resist, but continued to put her hands in her pussy and continued to masturbate. I told her, “Do you want to have sex?” She shook her head and said, “No, go away.” By this time, she had tears in her eyes. It seemed that she was a stubborn and self-respecting girl, and her consciousness was still resisting the drug.
I don’t take off my towel, my brother can’t take it anymore, I kiss her breasts and run my hands all over her body, finally removing her nightgown.
She cried breathlessly, “Please, don’t do this, okay.”
I took her hands out of her pussy and put them in her mouth: “Eat, eat your fluids.”
I was in a 69 position and I was licking my mouth and tongue around her pussy lips. By this time, her hands were already touching my brother. Gradually, she was sucking my dick. It was so comfortable.
At this point I deliberately left her body and stood up. Her godless eyes looked at me, her body slowly crawled over and continued to suck my dick. Hahaha, she was completely lost in thought.
I pushed her down on the couch. Grabbed the instant camera I had just bought at 7-11 and took a few pictures of Phi Mai, I was also afraid she would wake up and go to the police. After that, I went over to her, aimed at her hole, and stuck it in.
“Ah… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… I can’t… Please… please… let go… let go… let go… let go… let go!” She cried.
I didn’t think she would say something like that at this point, is the drug overdone? It seems the guy who sold me the pills lied to me, she also told me that it must kick in within half an hour once I take it and that the pills would last for 3-5 hours. It’s only been about 2 hours now. I don’t care about that much.
“Ah… no… it hurts… please stop… I can’t… I… I… I’m dying… don’t… any more… it hurts… oooooh… it really hurts… please let me go… ah… I… I… I… I’m going… to… die… ah… ah…” She kept pleading with me.
I smiled wickedly and replied, “It hurts, it’ll hurt again. It’s not the first time.”
“No, no, no… ah… no more… please…”
“No… no… no more… I… ah… I… I… can’t… it hurts… don’t… pull out… I’m dying…”
Gradually, when I thrust hard into her, she no longer resisted, and would cooperate with my movements, and from time to time would tighten her vagina, so that I could feel how wet and slippery her vagina was.
I was close to her ear, I asked her: “Little P, comfortable? If you do not say, I will not insert you.”
She replied reluctantly and lowered her voice: “Very… very… comfortable…”
I was thrusting harder and harder, to the bottom with each stroke, with great care, and with a constant “pop, pop…” sound, as my thighs and P’s thighs kept bumping against each other with each stroke.
“AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH… AH…” She kept moaning.
After about dozens of strokes, I couldn’t take it anymore. I wanted to pull out my cock from her vagina and cum in her mouth, but my fucking skills were not mature enough, so I ended up pulling out and cumming in her vagina.
I was so tired I fell asleep after I was done with her.
Gray Area (IV)
“Shit!” I suddenly woke up from my sleep. Because, I shouldn’t have fallen asleep.
Looking at P beside me, it was a good thing she wasn’t up yet, she was still deeply asleep. Looking at the time and looking out the window, it was already after 8am.
It was Sunday, and I didn’t have to go to work or class. There weren’t that many pedestrians on the road either, maybe it’s the fact that mornings at the beach aren’t that crowded in the first place.
I went to the bathroom and rinsed my body, took out the boy’s clothes that were in my backpack, and when I was about to put them on, “BANG!” The bathroom door opened and I was startled, but I still intuitively took the pre-hidden knife in my hand and whispered, “You’re awake.”
“You’re just going to leave?” She asked.
I replied coldly, “Or what?”
“I want you to take charge and be my boyfriend, and you want someone to help you with this hobby anyway, right?”
“You…” I thought to myself, ‘Yes, I have her negatives anyway, so it would be nice if she could help me dress up as a woman. The biggest thing is to kill her. I haven’t killed anyone yet, and I don’t want to.
“Uh, okay. You said it, I’m not forcing you! I have recordings and pictures, so you can’t sue me.” I said with my mouth threatening her.
“Uh huh, I know la.” She replied.
I do have a picture of her, but I didn’t record it, so if she sued me for rape I’d still be in jail, luckily she doesn’t have much legal common sense.
In the days to come, I had a woman by my side, and she usually helped me buy clothes that fit me, and we often made love to each other.
I grew to love her over time and treated her well, and she was obedient to me.
(End of Part 1)
It seemed like the response wasn’t very good, so I had to rush to end the first part.
Originally the story outline also had incest episodes of sex with his sister, sex with a fellow campus student, a little P who was later raped by my friend, and so on.
I don’t know if I’ll write again in the future, maybe I’m just a really bad writer, haha.
I hope the seniors and readers can give more comments and welcome criticism.
Gray Fringe 2000 2. 17.